Poor Imp

Tov glanced up, guilt too expressive to be aught but feigned. 'Er,' he said, 'I did.' In the dim room, dust dying the light grey, Fedya's stunned look turned into ...

Oy, yes. ^_^ I've glanced at "SHAPE[...]" and ought to be able to get to that in something like good time. IMP

Hello again. And you begin with characters you've already developed. Yet, dashing forward into the future, you've dropped something, I think. In both the prose and the characterisation, it skips--like

Hullo Twitter--or Wooster. I rather like the name Twooster, actually, er, as long as you don't mind. ^_^ Pardon me for beginning on an impertinent note. It's not always the ...

Hullo Twitter--or Wooster. I rather like the name Twooster, actually, er, as long as you don't mind. ^_^ Pardon me for beginning on an impertinent note. It's not always the ...

Sinister Jigster, my sincerest thanks. I will make note of the diction in repetition... Quashed and squashed a problem then? Ah, I had thought I merely had Teresa saying quashed--as ...

Er...hullo, Panic. Do you really write then? The lack of punctuation and capital letters makes the case a little dubious. ^_~ Anyhow, pardon me being flippant. ^_^ Welcome to YWS! ...

Oh! Right! I did it for your contest, didn't I? I never really did thank you for that. It turned out pretty well, I guess, and if anything, it became ...

Thanks for the quick replies! IMP: I adore Emily Dickinson. :D In fact there is much Dickinsonian (??) influence in my poetry: I use a lot of 4-line stanzas, abcb ...

Wooster (nee Twit)-- Ha, anything written by you has got to be decently grounded, in a backwards, feet planted in the sky sort of way. ^_~ I'll get to that ...

Hullo Twiggy. ^_^ Welcome to YWS. It is a brilliant--perfect place to read good writing as well as get good comments on works-in-progress. Have you got a favourite poet? Favourite ...

University classes winding down and such. And I've dead-ditched any intent to take classes over the summer. ^^ ...meaning I've a slight bit of time. Anyhow, if you're poor in ...

Hey Imagination. Welcome to YWS--'tis a rather brilliant site, altogether. ^_^ I could say "I'm Imp"--but it'd be bloody rotten to state the obvious for first impressions. ^_~ Anyhow, as ...

Hey Junc. ^_^ Er, anything somewhat recent that you've written and would like to post? I'd hit this with a critique. But I'd hate to tinker with something you'd done ...

Hullo Junc! Welcome and all that sort of thing. Ah, in a box? Poetry must weave its own fabric if it means to ditch the traditional box. ^_~ Meaning, in ...